高考问答锦绣风华之农医商女:请帮我看看这篇文章有没有错~
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再帮我填上题目...谢谢
I usually get up at eight in the morning.I eat breakfast at eightfifteen. Then I do my homework from eight thiry to ten. AT ten in the morning I watch TV.I have lunch at twelve.After lunch I read books for thirty minute.Then I go to bed.In the afternoon I listen to CD and clean my room.I eat dinner at 6:30.At ten in the evening I go to bed.
I usually get up at eight in the morning.I eat breakfast at eightfifteen. Then I do my homework from eight thiry to ten. AT ten in the morning I watch TV.I have lunch at twelve.After lunch I read books for thirty minute.Then I go to bed.In the afternoon I listen to CD and clean my room.I eat dinner at 6:30.At ten in the evening I go to bed.
CDs，没什么错，但是就是重复的太多了。
题目嘛。A day of my holiday
I TAKE 或者HAVE BREAKFAST.
这篇文章重复太多了，你是小学生吗？
那些时间少加一点比较好。帮你重新改一改。
a day of my life
I usually get up at 8 in the morning and i take my breakfast 15 minutes later.Then I begin to deal with my assingment.at 10 o'clock,i start to watch tv until 12.then i go to have lunch.after lunch,i always read some books for 30minutes.then i will take a rest or listen to CDs.sometimes i will clean my bedroom.at 6:30 i have dinner with my parents.and at 10o'clock,i go to bed .
随便写写。给个建议拉。
1.AT ten in the morning I watch TV(只是10点那个片刻在看电视?)-------------------AT ten in the morning I begin to watch TV
2.for thirty minute-------------for thirty minutes
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my timetable in the winter holiday