高考问答怎么炒外盘原油:英语问题
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Thanks to the development of society ,there exists a socil probelm about generation gap between the old and the young .
There are many misunderstanding between them.Fox example ,the young very like to pursue the populor things and they also dress very fashion. But the old people think them express themselves too opening .Besides,the old often order the young to accept their idea thus causing trouble in the family.
How to solve this problem ? First ,we encourage the young to communicate with their parents ,so that they can accept the new ideas .Also the young should listen to good advice from their parents.
From the solve ways ,I think this generation gap will disappear in no-distance future.
请好心人帮我分析一下这段话，有什么错误吗？请帮忙指正出来。谢谢。
Generation Gap
Thanks to the development of society ,there exists a socil probelm about generation gap .
There are many misunderstandings between the old and the young.
Fox example ,the young like to pursue popular things and dress in fashion. But the old people think they have expressed themselves too much .Besides,the old often order the young to accept their ideas and then cause troubles in the family.
How can we solve this problem ? First ,we should encourage the young to communicate with their parents ,so that the old can accept their new ideas .Also the young should listen to the good advice from their parents.
in this way ,I think this generation gap will disappear in no-distance future.
注意一下单复数，还有多一点时态变化
socil该为social very 不能修饰like 第二个very 也不准确
呵呵这篇文章语法错误有点多啊呵呵