刀锋意志连招顺序2017:帮忙翻译一下 （我小学）

My family has four people, father and mother elder brother and I. We are a happy family. father and mother are the businessmen.Older brother is study in the university.I am in Grade Six,and soon rises into the junior middle school

我也是水平不高试试吧
There are four people in my family,father,mother,older brother and me.we are a happy family.My father and mother are merchants,my older brother is a student of university ,I am in grand six. after several days,I will become a middle school student.

上面的应该翻译的还行吧
就是这句“哥哥正在上大学”应该改成这样要好点"my brother just at up university"

There are four people in my family.My father,my mother,my brother and I.We are a beatific family.My parents are businesses,my brother is a university man.I'm a student of Grade Six.I'll be a middle school student soon.
我不是直译的,但是你想表达的意思~考虑下吧!~