蜗居大结局视频:我的英文这样自我介绍行吗

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错误很多啊, 一个大写都没有啊。
....i am from quanzhou改成I am from Quanzhou.

in my g4 and 5...i am study in the guangzhou clifford english school..改成：I was studying at the Guangzhou Clifford English School in my 4th and 5th grade.

..i very happy to meet we are...改成:I am very happy to meet you.

i think ..we can be friend.....改成:I believe that we can be good friends.

还得好好学啊！

喜欢那里可以填my hobbies are......

Good morning everyone...my name is Susan..i'am 14 years old....i am from quanzhou my favourate sport is badminton...in my g4 and 5...i was studying in the guangzhou clifford english school..i am very happy to meet you...i think ..we can be friends.....

不对
没看见后面是is吗？
favourite最喜欢的
“in my g4 and 5”什么意思啊？
最后面，be是系动词后接副词形容词， friend是名词。应该是 friendly.

Good morning everyone...my name is Susan..i'am 14 yeas old....i come from quanzhou .my favourate sport is playing badminton...(in my g4 and 5 什么意思）...i study in the guangzhou clifford english school..i am very happy to meet you all...i think ..we can be good friends..

基本上面都可以了，不过个人认为my favourite sport is playing badminton改成i like playing badminton比较好