乐富支付有限公司:哪位GGJJ能帮我写几片英语日记

我每天都写英语日记的,可是日记那么值钱的东西,你去一点分都不给,想想还是不给你写了,要是你能加点分数我一定帮你哦

只加5分啊,算了,帮你写吧,日期就让你自己写了
以下的还是我初中里写的呢．
一:
I want to keep diaries in order to improve my English.But i'm not persistent.i tried many times but gave up every time.sometimes,i find it has nothing to write.and sometimes i don't have enough spare time.
now more and more students are keeping diaries
.i got worried about it.so i have decided to keep disries. however ,i wonder whether i will fail again.
i told mother about my worry .she said :"you must believe in yourself ." yes, as the saying goes,"where there is a will ,there is a way."

二:
in today's english class ,we held the talk show for the second time.
during the talk show,everyone who took part in did wonderfully.although i didn't join in becase of the limited time,i felt pleased all the same.on one hand , it shows that most of my classmates are good at spoken english.hu bin is the best one in my opinion.he can speak english glibly and his english composition are excellent .on the other hand , the talk show brings me some press .i found i'm far behind some other students in spokenenglish.maybe i should speak or write in english as often as possible.
"it's dogged that does it."

差不多了吧，要是以后有什么英语问题就尽管问好了，不过可别再那么小气，只给5分了啊，呵呵！

想问一下楼下的,你是不是觉得不应该用过去时啊,那你就错了,日记是当天记的,有些的确是不用过去时,但我写的这两篇发生的事情是在我白天,是在我当天晚上写日记之前,所以我并不觉得用过去时是错误的.

sunday:today ,i found a pretty girl,i love her
monday:she became my gf
tuesday：i got married to her

哥哥``你时态错了``