歪歪鱼刷礼物大战:初一英文日记范文

Mid-autumn Day

Mid-Autumn Day is a traditional festival in China. It often comes in September or October, on the 15th of the 8th of the lunar month. Everybody likes it because it's a family get-together. Now, I will say something about this festival.
Firstly, I'd like to say something about the moon. That day the moon is round, big. When I see the moon, I will think about Armstrong's first moonwalk. I will also miss my friends in Taiwan, in Macao and the Chinese people who are abroad.
Secondly, I’ll say something about the traditions on Mid-Autumn Day. All members of the family sit around a big table under a tree in the open air. They eat mooncakes and enjoy the sight of full moon in the sky. The mooncakes and the moon represent a family’s love.
Thirdly，Mid-Autumn Day is a very good opportunity to make three wishes. My wishes are: the first: I, as an astronaut in the future, would like to go to the moon one day; the second: I hope every person in the world will stay with their family, and share love with their family forever; the third: I hope everybody's dream will come true.
To my mind, that is the perfect Mid-Autumn Day. I will always remember: East or West, home is best.

这是讲中秋节的。不错的。希望可以帮到你。

（PS。这篇文章经过外教审校，完全标准。我本人是做英文翻译的。）

中秋节
中秋节是中国传统节日.它通常在九月或十月，在农历八月十五日。每人都喜欢它因为这是一次家庭聚会，现在我要说一些关于这个节日的事。
首先，我想要说一些关于月亮的事。那天的月亮又大又圆。当我看到月亮的时候，我就会想到Armstrong的月球之旅。我也会记得我在台湾，在澳门和在国外的中国朋友们
第二，我要讲一些中秋节的传统。全家人围桌在。。。。。。。 明天翻译

一楼的写的不错，但是语法错误太多，是按照中文直译的吧。中文和英文的语法是不一样的。