高考问答怎么注册电话号码:我写了一首英文歌,但是不知道句子对不对,请帮我看下,找下有没有错?
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歌词:
what have i got to do to make you love me what have i got to do to make you care
what can i do when lightning strikes me
what do i do to make you want me
what have i go to do to be heard
what do i say when it's all over
it's sad so sad
it's a sad ,sad situation
And it's getting more and more absurd
it's sad, so sad
why can't we talk it over
(iepeat the second part)
Over!
what have i got to do to make you love me what have i got to do to make you care
what can i do when lightning strikes me
what do i do to make you want me
what have i go to do to be heard
what do i say when it's all over
it's sad so sad
it's a sad ,sad situation
And it's getting more and more absurd
it's sad, so sad
why can't we talk it over
(iepeat the second part)
Over!
what do i do to make you want me => what should i do to make you want me .
why can't we talk it over =>why can't we talk it again.
what do i say when it's all over =>what should i say when it's all over
第五句是不是用将来时会好一点？
第三句可以说 what shall i do to ...
第四句，如果助动词是have，那是不是应该用gone
可能说的不对，见谅
怎么象某首歌的歌词啊?
语法错误