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As the energy and the foundation raw and semifinished materials industries, the petroleum and the chemical industry holds the pivotal status in the national economy development, its development horizontal influence to downriver correspondence, building materials, automobile, light industry, spinning and weaving and so on many professions development. Our country consumption each kind of domestic resources and the import resources approximately is equal to 5000000000 tons, the crude oil, the raw coal, the iron ore, the steel products, the aluminum oxide and the cement consumption, the distinction approximately for the world consumption 7.4%, 31%, 30%, 27%, 25% and 40%. The high consumption trades the growth, causes the waste to discharge, the environmental pollution much is serious, our country unit GDP waste water, the solid discharges the level which the thing discharges greatly is higher than the developed country.