真户晓 亚门钢太郎:哪位能帮我检查一下,这段话有没有错误.谢谢了.

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Dear sir:

Thanks a lot for your mail!

My company is manufacturer so I think we can give you the bester price .The Shandong province produce wicker and tung ,so we have the advantage. At the same time we are interested in long term business.

we don't have any representativi . But you can contact with me like this or give tele and fax .I'm very glad too.

In the last year ,we participate in Guang Zhou axhibitions.This is a good axhititions.

If you want order some goods ,pls red Terms＆ Conditions in our website:www.qq-arts.com It can help you known how to order my products.

Best regards !

Miao Xiangsong
QiQiang arts&carfts co.Ltd

Dear sir:

Thanks a lot for your mail!

My company is a manufacturer so I think we can give you the best price .Shandong province produce wicker and tung ,so we have the advantage. At the same time ,we are interested in long term business.

we don't have any agents, but you can contact with me in these ways:telephone and fax .I'll be very glad to contact with you.

Last year ,we participated the Guang Zhou axhibition.It is a good axhitition.

If you want order some goods ,pls read Terms＆ Conditions in our website:www.qq-arts.com It can help you order our products.

Best regards !

Miao Xiangsong
QiQiang arts&carfts co.Ltd

只是普通的商业信件，够用了

manufaturer前加a
bester改成best
produce加s
give 改成 by
participate加d
want 加to
known 改成know
另外我觉得把所有的my改成our 比较合适

仅供参考

bester应改为better
I'm glad too 应改为I'll be glad too.
If you want order应改为If you want to order
help you known应改为help you know

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