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初一英语作文范文 自我介绍,外貌描述,自己的家人等

I am a girl from ### jurnor high school. I am not very tall. I have long hair, big eyes. I like reading,music,sport. i am a very sunny and nice girl. There are three members in my family, my father, my mother and I.
My father is an engineer. He is very strict with my study, but he is a good father. He often plays tennis with me and helps me a lot in my study.
My mother is a teacher. She takes good care of my life. I have a happy family and I love my father and my mother very much.

My school trip
Last Sunday,our school had a school to the Tianmu Lake, we all enjoyed ourselves.
First we climed the hill, when we got to the top of the hill,we saw the whole hill,it was so beautiful,the trees are green and the lake is so blue.
In the afternoon , we went to a little island ,we played games there,and everyone had a nice time .
Last we had to go back to our school ,I took some photos of the lake.
How unforgetful the trip was!

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还是改错，有不少啊！

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