灵魂有香气的女子作者:短文改错

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Many teenagers feel that the more important people in their lives is their friends. They think that their parents don't know them as well as their friends are. In big families, it is quite often for brothers and sisters to fight each other and then they can only go to their friends for advice. It is very important for teenagers to have one good friends and a group friends. They can always talk with each other by the phone. this kind of communication is not very important for teenagers.

more - most
They think that their parents don't know- they don't think that theit patents know
as their friends are - as their friends do
fight - fight with
one good friends - one good friend
and a group friends - or a group of friends
this -This
is not -is

more-most
is-are
as their friends are--去掉are (前有do,后无to)所以不能把are换成to
and-or
and-but
friends-friends'
one good friends-a good friend
and a group friends-or a group of friends
by the phone - on the phone
this - This
not 去掉

1, more---most
2, are---do(因为前文中their parents don't know them，谓语动词know是实义动词，后文friends后对应用do）
3,often--frequently often是副词，此处应该需要形容词．
4,fight后加against( fight against与某人打架)
5,one--a 这里并不确指一个朋友,而是泛指
6,friends--friend 单数
7,and --or
8,group 后加 of a group of表示一群,是固定词组.
9,by--on,固定用法
10,this--This
11,去掉not,根据全文意思,本句应为肯定句.

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