高考问答铜川招聘:请为高人指点迷津!
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I`m a boy and I`m from №15 meddie school.I`m in Class 3, Great 1. I am not very tall.But I`m very happy . I like reading English books , lesson to music , play basketball and go shopping . I`m a very sunny and nice boy . On school day.I have four lessons in the morning , in afternoon I aslo have four lessons . My favourite lesson is English.
There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and I.
My father is an office . He is very buzy , so he can`t with me to do my homework , but he is a good father . He often plays basketball with me on Saturday and Sunday . He often buys some food and drink for me . So I love him very much.
My mother is a teacher. She is a good teacher . She teaches Chinese very much . She often with me do my homework . Her students love her very much . I love her very much , too .
I have a happy family . I love my family .
这篇短文有什么问题尽管发表! 可以帮我修改一下, 写在答案上. 要求2分钟以上的时间,可能不够,请多多指点!
middle不是MIDDIE。另外，应该是listening to music,playing basketball,going shopping,必须加ing.officer不是office.she often with me to do my homework.没有is,必须加to
lesson to music ？
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I`m a boy and I`m from №15 meddie school.I`m in Class 3, Great 1. I am not very tall.But I`m very happy . I like reading English books , lesson to music , play basketball and go shopping . I`m a very sunny and nice boy . On school day.I have four lessons in the morning , in afternoon I aslo have four lessons . My favourite lesson is English.
There are three people in my family, my father, my mother and I.
My father is an office . He is very buzy , so he can`t with me to do my homework , but he is a good father . He often plays basketball with me on Saturday and Sunday . He often buys some food and drink for me . So I love him very much.
My mother is a teacher. She is a good teacher . She teaches Chinese very much . She often with me do my homework . Her students love her very much . I love her very much , too .
I have a happy family . I love my family .
这篇短文有什么问题尽管发表! 可以帮我修改一下, 写在答案上. 要求2分钟以上的时间,可能不够,请多多指点!
提问者：3022881 - 童生 一级
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lesson to music ？
回答者：baoyujing_07 - 助理 二级 3-4 21:09
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