河南法制频道周日节目:帮忙检查一下有没有语法错误

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My visual field limits at my eyes only
But as long as see you, it becomes infinite
No one believes fall in love at first sight
But this kind of special felling is permeating me imperceptibly
I can't fall asleep in every whole night
Because of you I've fallen into the sea of woes
I can't refuse to face the reality
But I hope the pains and sufferings can be ended like the meteor of the downfall
I always see you in the classroom
I am always tormenting myself
I always use a kind of ignorant way to evade
One of my friends told me "DO not use regret to cure your wound"
But I think I am drinking a bottle of water that is filled with helpless
Because I know the taste of being refused
But I don't want to let the pains and sufferings growing in heart
Now, I sincerely want to know you

But as long as see you, it becomes infinite
应为:...as long as i see you...

No one believes fall in love at first sight
应为:...believes in love at first sight.

I can't fall asleep in every whole night
应为:...asleep every night

But I hope the pains and sufferings can be ended like the meteor of the downfall
pain和suffering都是不可数,不用复数。

But I think I am drinking a bottle of water that is filled with helpless
helpless是形容词,考虑用despair或者emptiness呢?

Because I know the taste of being refused
taste最好用feeling

But I don't want to let the pains and sufferings growing in heart
最好用in my heart.growing改成grow.

以上供参考。

没有拉,意思是我的视野范围内,但在我眼里,只要看到只是你,没有人相信它变得无限谈恋爱乍一看,但这是一种特殊的砍伐,我可以潜移默化地渗透到我 ' t入睡,因为你整晚都在我 ' ve落入苦海,我可以 ' t不肯面对现实,但我希望,痛可以结束痛苦像流星的堕落我总是看到你在课堂上,我总是折磨自己,我总是用一种无知的方式来逃避我的一位朋友告诉我 " 不用遗憾治好伤 " 我觉得我喝了一瓶水,充满无奈,因为我知道我的味道,但被拒绝穿上 ' t要让心中的痛苦,现在越来越多的痛苦,我衷心希望你们知道