重生之豪门契约妻结局:作文修改

Thurs,march.23 fine
The weather had been bad for days,but today it was sunny.After breakfast I decided to enjoy the sunshine outdoors.Suddenly I remembered there was going to be a computer examination.What a pity!Before leaving the dormitory,I should wash clothes,for weather forecaster said it would be rainy again.
问题大大的多。要考试出不去了和又要下雨了必须洗衣服之间有什么必然联系？一点自然的过渡都没有。
这不能算是一篇合格的作文。
时态混乱，句式单一，需要多努力！
唉，也许我对初中生不应该这么苛刻~

Thursday, Mar.23, Sunny Day
It is a sunny day. Long time no see, Sun! So,I wanted to run out( not over) to enjoy the sunshine after the breakfast( 而非先After breakfast,再去want) Suddenly, I remembered that I would have a computer test( 去掉find,remember不+ING， examination=test）。
what a pity thing!
Be4 I leave dormitory, I should have to washed clothes,( + have to 表示不得不作某事， should wash+ed表过去时态）for the next day would ( +the next day,这样明确， 不是 will 而是would：,表过去的将来时）be a rainy day again , forcasted by the weather forcaster.

It is a sunny day and there is a long time since i saw the sunshine last time.So I want to run over to enjoy the sunshine after breakfast. But suddenly I remembering my computer examination. What a pity! furthermore, I have to wash clothes before I leave my dormitory,because the weather forecast said it will be a rainy day again in the future.