高考问答属于表弟的妈妈伍第6章:请改错－－谢谢.....
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每个人都有个难忘的童年，我也一样，小时候的我是个可爱活泼的女孩，最喜欢就是吃，有一次，我晚上好想吃糖，但妈妈怕我弄坏了牙齿，所以把糖全藏了起来，后来我爬上柜子找糖吃，不小心从凳子上摔了下来，之后我再也不拿糖吃了．
以下译文有什么问题请一一指出，谢谢！
Every one has an indelible childhood, so am I.When I was young, I was a lovely and lively girl. The most intersting thing for me was eating. Once I wanted to eat sugar at night, but my mother was afraid that it will damage my teeth, so she hide all the sugars. Subsequently I look for the sugar by clambering the cabinet, and knocked down from the chair. From then on, I never look for sugar to eat.
以下译文有什么问题请一一指出，谢谢！
Every one has an indelible childhood, so am I.When I was young, I was a lovely and lively girl. The most intersting thing for me was eating. Once I wanted to eat sugar at night, but my mother was afraid that it will damage my teeth, so she hide all the sugars. Subsequently I look for the sugar by clambering the cabinet, and knocked down from the chair. From then on, I never look for sugar to eat.
总体看来，这篇文章似乎没有什麼语法错误，但是仔细分析，有些词还是不是很恰当，当然，个人之见，请参考：
1.Every one--everyone
2.indelible--也可以用unforgettable，我觉得好象unforgettable更好一些
3.when I was young---when I was a child 因为young指年轻的时候，而这里要表达的是我是一个小孩的时候
4.at night--in the evening 前者指在夜里，指半夜12点以后，而应该是in the evening
5.damage --destroy前者指严重的破坏，用在这里不恰当
6.sugars---candies
7.clambering指攀登---get on
8.knocked down --fell down