阿虎刘德华手机观看:谁能帮我准确的翻译一下，也可以帮我改一下汉语的表达呀

张经理，
您好！
首先先向您对我们工作的支持表示感谢。
在有数的几次与贵公司的联系中，我们已经了解到贵公司是技术性与服务性皆到位的优秀公司。贵公司所邮寄给我们的资料，我公司经理已经过目，并很感兴趣。
但因为一些其他的原因，此次的定单，我们已经同上海方面签定。对此，我深表歉意。
但此次尝试，已经为你我两家公司互相了解起到了重要的作用，相信我们很快就有机会再次合作。
谢谢！

译文如下：

Dear Mr.Zhang,
Pls let me say thanks to you first.
According to our contact, we have know your company does well in both technology and service.About the information you have sent to us, our manager have a aborative look and a high appraisable.
For some other reasons, we have given the order to Shanghai Company, I am sorry to tell you that.
But this time we have a good chance to know each other well, so I trust we will have another cooperation soon.
TKS!

那我就小试一下 第一次给人翻译 如有不妥敬请见谅！

译文如下：
Mr. Zhang:
Thanks for your support on my work,During the phoen conversation,I feel that your company which combined the advance technology and great service was so wonderful!
We have received your datas and Mr.Wang approved on it.
This list has been subscribed by the department in Shanghai.
Thanks for your attention!
Let's look forward to the next cooperation oportunity opportunity

Yours, XXX
2006-04-20

Dear MR.Zhang,
I'm writing to appreciate your support for my work, and through a few telephone call, we all consider that your company is one that can combine technology with service perfectly. We have received you materials and presented them to our manager,Mr wang, who has shown much interesting and attenion in them.
But now, I am sorry to inform you that we have signed contract with a company locates in shanghai this tiemm, and we wish we can get cooperation next time.

sincerely yours
Liming

Manager zhang:
How are you!Thanks for your favor for my work at first.I feel your company is one connecting techonology and service perfectly through several talking with you in telephone.Manager wang has looked through the material from your company and paid much attention for it.
I'm very sorry we have signed with shanghai.Wish happy cooperation next time.