日本美浓天气预报:英语文章修改6

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Paul and Miriam were close partner in the innocent childhood. But Miriam was a pious Christian as the same as her mother."She was so pure that as long as mention that any a little things about mating, she would feel uncomfortable."(P156 ) She loved Paul but didn’t not dare to admit, did not dare to love. She regarded it as a desire blaming and tormenting herself. She prayed: "Oh, God, don't let me love Paul. If I should love him, please separate us right away! " (P165) She only wanted to keep the love of spirit of a kind of Plato type with Paul and did not relate to the human body. She cherished one chastity woman style religious sense to treat love of Paul. She was not willing and didn’t allow Paul's love to be sexual, oriented their love on the aspects of a kind of abstract and soul. When Paul attempted to further develop their love, he thought that there was an insurmountable protective screen sideways between them. "Then what was the obstacle? This obstacle lay in the constraint of the human body. " (P271) Paul thought " what she needed was only his soul, but not his health. " (P188) And, Paul knew " what she wants to combine with me is soul " too. (P270)

partner --> partners
mention --> mentioning
any a little things --> 删掉 a
didn't not --> 删掉 not
a desire --> 后面加 of
love of spirit --> spiritual love
relate to --> 中间加 it
willing --> 后面加 to

A great number of errors turn up in the above article, which is really disgusting for me!