2016男女就业比例数据:make soneone else glad

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make someone else glad
one day, Ms smart was asking her pupils:"now children,who has made someone else glad?"
"please, teacher." a small boy said :"I've made someone else glad."
"well done. who was that ?"
"my granny."
"Good boy . now tell us how you made your granny glad."
"please , teacher. I went to see her yesterday, I stayed with her three hours,then I said to her ;I 'm going home .and she said :I'm glad."
上面是上小学二年级的女儿准备在班上讲得一个笑语,请各位指导一下是否有不恰当之处,敬请指正.

我觉得这样写会流畅一些:
making someone else glad
One day, Ms Smart asked her pupils:"now children, who has made someone else glad?"
"Ms Smart," said a small boy," I've made someone else glad."
"Well done. Who was that?"
"My granny."
"Good boy. Now tell us how you made your granny glad."
"I went to see her yesterday, i stayed with her for three hours, then i said to her i was going home and she said she was glad.

我有点不解,为什么小孩说话要加please teacher.内容倒是挺好的,有趣.

第四行,said a mall boy