高考问答春风得意进宝楼剧透:求助，怎么写
来源：百度文库 编辑：高考问答 时间：2024/04/30 12:01:59
The following appeared in a memo from a vice president of Alta Manufacturing.
"During the past year, Alta Manufacturing had thirty percent more on-the-job accidents than nearby Panoply Industries, where the work shifts are one hour shorter than ours. Experts believe that a significant contributing factor in many on-the-job accidents is fatigue and sleep deprivation among workers. Therefore, to reduce the number of on-the-job accidents at Alta and thereby increase productivity, we should shorten each of our three work shifts by one hour so that our employees will get adequate amounts of sleep."
请针对以上memo中的逻辑错误，写出批驳文章，文章要体现 academic English 特点。不要联系自己情况，随便谈感想。
"During the past year, Alta Manufacturing had thirty percent more on-the-job accidents than nearby Panoply Industries, where the work shifts are one hour shorter than ours. Experts believe that a significant contributing factor in many on-the-job accidents is fatigue and sleep deprivation among workers. Therefore, to reduce the number of on-the-job accidents at Alta and thereby increase productivity, we should shorten each of our three work shifts by one hour so that our employees will get adequate amounts of sleep."
请针对以上memo中的逻辑错误，写出批驳文章，文章要体现 academic English 特点。不要联系自己情况，随便谈感想。
下列各项在来自阿尔塔的一个副总裁的一份备忘录制造业中出现。
"在过去的年期间，阿尔塔制造有了百分之三十较在职的意外事件胜于附近的全套披甲工业,在工作变化比我们的短一个小时的地方。 专家相信重要的有助于许多在职的意外事件的因素是疲累和睡眠在工人之中的剥夺。因此, 减少在阿尔塔的在职意外事件的数字和藉此增加生产力,我们应该弄短我们的每三工作变化一小时以便我们的职员将会得到适当量的睡眠。"
你自己玩吧。。。