青岛卓美服装有限公司:帮忙修改一下语法错误, 十分感谢,急等!!!!

In order to give prominence to some product and information, through duplicates some essential words and the same sentence structure consciously, strengthened semantics, foiled subject, unfolded the emotion. It enable the main information of the advertisement obtain full emphasis and increases dynamics. So it is a common skill. The sentence is simple in advertisement language that can help the audiences to solve difficult problem ''the understanding breadth limited'' through repetition.
Furthermore, English advertisement fully use the principle of cohesion to help the audiences to pay attention to the content of advertisement information, thus obtains the advertisement's memory value.

By using the different meanings to achieve the goal of suggestion and sale promotion product. Creating new words not only effective to disseminate the information, but also has endowed with advertisements great charm.
Through various lexical methods to achieve attention value, memory value, readability, expressive function, directive function, aesthetic in the advertisement language.
能具体改一下吗?我的语法实在烂的可以.多谢了!