找不到原身:高分悬赏翻译！！机器勿扰！质量要求很高，高手请进

上楼的翻译不错，切磋切磋！
钢铁工业Iron and steel industry
句子结构有点混乱，不信的话可以去WORD里测试
1.The Union Medical College Hospital considers its China leading technical personnels as its core，it’s a thriving team which composed of personnels, devices, technical measures，and management.
这个句子由两个句子组成，却没连词
2. China is a great developing country, and steel demand of China is fairly much in fairly long term, its production leads the world for many years, but our technical level and material consumption are bad, compared to international advanced standard.
这句话中lead应该是leading，作伴随状语，否则就是个病句。

也不能老是挑人错误，鄙人陋译望共勉之！

Cored with the domestic advanced technology and talents, composed of excellent personnel, advanced facilities, fine technical measures and good management methods, Xiehe Hospital is a continual perfection-pursuing team in its related field, providing best-quality, hi-tech, and competitively market-oriented services with self-made brand series. What is more, Xiehe Hospital is also worthy of its name with perfect after-sales and customer-focused services, paying great attention and interests to any suggestions and feedbacks raised by customers. Both pre-sales quality management and after-sales services are attached special importance within the hospital. In order to satisfy and exceed the continually-growing customer need and expectation, Xiehe Hospital persists in improving its overall outstanding achievements. At present, the sales network of Xiehe Hospital is spread all over the country, its products being favorably accepted by large- and medium-sized hospitals and medication companies, gaining a good reputation throughout the medication and health circles and winning outstanding economic benefits.

Iron and steel industry, an important base in the national economy and a backbone to realize the national industrialization, is a technology-, capital-, resource- and energy-intensive industry, the development of which needs to integrate and balance various exterior factors. As a big developing country, China posts a great demand for iron and steel in a quite long period of time ahead in its economic growth, with its iron and steel output ranking first in the world. However, there is still a gap between China and the world in terms of technological level and substance-consuming standard of iron and steel industry. The key to develop our iron and steel industry in the future lies in technology upgrading and structure adjusting. We should set our aims to enhance the overall technological level of our iron and steel industry, push forward the structure adjusting, improve the industry arrangement, develop the recycling economy, reduce the consumption of substance and energy, attach great importance to environmental protection, and sharp the competitive edge of our enterprises. Moreover, we should also maintain the purpose of achieving the industry upgrading and basically making the quantity, quality and variety of the iron and steel industry satisfy the need put forward by rapid economic and social development, and of turning our iron and steel industry to be competitive internationally. In accordance with the relevant laws and regulations and the present situations our iron and steel industry face home and abroad, we need to establish specific policies to direct the healthy development of iron and steel industry.

手工翻译就是比机器强4亿倍！！！
哈哈哈～～

1，“但钢铁产业的技术水平和”物耗”与国际先进水平相比还有差距”：物耗小了不好么？有汉语语病，自己斟酌，但在英文中已经矫正。
2，以满足并“超越”不断发展的需求和期望：超越干什么？超越是经济危机的前兆啊？三思！
3,医疗、”卫生”界? 这“卫生”恐怕是医疗吧？
协和医疗Union Medical College Hospital
国内领先的China leading….
技术人才technical personnel
技术手段technical measures或者Technical manual
Steel industry钢铁产业
国民经济National economy
密集型产业concentrated industry或者intensive industry
after service售后服务
循环经济（Recycling Economy / Cyclic Economy）
产业升级Industry upgrade
营销网点marketing. network
大中型医院large-scaled and middle hospitals

The Union Medical College Hospital considers its China leading technical personnels as its core，it’s a thriving team which composed of personnels, devices, technical measures，and management. The company provides high-quality, high-tech, strong market-competence product lists with independent brand combined with perfect after service. And we should focus on the customers and all of their suggestions and evaluations. We stress on both the quality management of the products before sale and their after-service，sustained to improve the whole achievement of the enterprises so that they can satisfy or surpass the increasing demands and respects of the customers. Currently, the marketing. networks of this company are all over our country, its products are used in many large-scaled and middle hospitals and medical companies, gain popular praises from medical and sanitation fields, and they have created good economical performance.
Steel industry is the base of national economy, the upholding industry in modern industries, and the technology, capital, resource, energy intensive industry. The development of steel industry needs to integrate and regulate various exterior conditions. China is a great developing country, and steel demand of China is fairly much in fairly long term, its production leads the world for many years, but our technical level and material consumption are bad, compared to international advanced standard. The developmental emphases in the future are technical upgrade and the structural regulation. To improve the whole technical level of the steel industry, impetus the structural regulation，meliorate the industrial layout, develop the cyclic economy, desrease the consumption of materials and energy, stress on environmental protection, improve the integrated competence of the enterprises, fulfill the industry upgrade，develop our steel industries being basically satisfy the demand of national economy and social development on quantity, quality, and variety, occupying international competence. According to the relative laws and the inner & exterior states that the steel industries facing, we should establish the policy of steel industries development to indicate their health development.

The harmony medical service take the home leading technology talented person as a core, and form a team by personnel, equipment, technical method, management. The company provides the quality outstanding, the technical content high, the market competitive power strong independent brand product series and matches by the perfect post-sale service, take the customer as the attention focal point, all invests the enormous attention to customer any suggestion and the appraisal, also takes the product the pre-sale quality control, takes the product the post-sale service, improves the enterprise overall achievement continually, meets and surmounted the need and the expectation which the customer develops unceasingly. At present the company marketing mesh point proliferates each place, the product enters national each large and middle scale hospitals and the medical company, has obtained medical, the health universal high praise and creates the good economic efficiency.
The steel and iron industry is the national economy important foundation industry, realizes the industrialization support industry, is technical, the fund, the resources, the energy intensity industry, the steel and iron industry development needs overall balance each kind of external condition. Our country is a developing nation, the steel and iron demand is big in the economical development suitable length time, output many years have occupied the world first, but the steel and iron industry technical level and the material and energy consumption and the international advanced level compare also have the disparity, the next development priorities will be the technical promotion and the structure adjustment. In order to raise the iron and steel industry overall technical level, the advancement structure adjustment, the improvement industry layout, the development circulation economy, reduces the material and energy consumption energy consumption, takes the environmental protection, enhances the enterprise to synthesize the competitive power, realizes the industry to promote, develops the steel and iron industry in quantity, the quality, the variety satisfies basically the national economy and the social development demand, has the international competitive power industry, the domestic and foreign situations which the basis relevant law laws and regulations and the steel and iron profession face, formulates the steel and iron industry development policy, instructs the steel and iron industry the healthy development.

Help with medical treatment with the domestic lead of technique talented person for core is constituted together by the personnel,equipments,technique means,the management method of a pursues a perfect team continuously.The company provides quality excellent,the technique content is high,the market competition ability strong independent brand product line also go together with with the perfect after-sales service, take customer as to pay attention to a focus, all throw in a tremendous concern to the customer's any suggestion and evaluations, since the value product sells an ex- quality management, valuing the after-sales service of the product more, keeping on a whole accomplishment of the improvement business enterprise to surmount the need and the expectation that the customer develops continuously also by satisfy.The company marketing net point spreads all over the whole country everyplace currently, the product enters each big and medium-sized hospital and the medical treatment company in whole country, acquiring the widespread good opinion of the medical treatment,the health field and create a good economic performance.

The steel industry is the important foundation industry of the national economy, is a realization to industrialize of prop up industry, is a technique,funds,resources,energy intensive type industry, the development demand of the steel industry synthesizes equilibrium and various exterior condition.The our country is a big country in a development, the steel need compares greatly in the equal long time of the economic development the period, the yield has already resided the first in world for many years, but the technique level and thing of the steel industry consume to compare with international advanced level to still have a margin, will develop a point from now on is a technique to get stripe to adjust with structure.In order to raise industrial whole technique level of steel, push forward structure adjustment, improve industry layout, develop circulation economy, lowering a thing to consume it can consume, value environmental protection, exaltation business enterprise comprehensive competition ability, carry out an industrial upgrading, the steel industry development become basic in the quantity,quality,the top of the species satisfy the national economy and society develop a need, having the industry of the international competition ability, facing according to concerning the law laws and the steel profession of domestic and international situation, draw up the steel industry a development a policy to guide the healthy development of the steel industry.

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The harmony medical service take the home leading technology talented person as a core, and form a team by personnel, equipment, technical method, management. The company provides the quality outstanding, the technical content high, the market competitive power strong independent brand product series and matches by the perfect post-sale service, take the customer as the attention focal point, all invests the enormous attention to customer any suggestion and the appraisal, also takes the product the pre-sale quality control, takes the product the post-sale service, improves the enterprise overall achievement continually, meets and surmounted the need and the expectation which the customer develops unceasingly. At present the company marketing mesh point proliferates each place, the product enters national each large and middle scale hospitals and the medical company, has obtained medical, the health universal high praise and creates the good economic efficiency.
The steel and iron industry is the national economy important foundation industry, realizes the industrialization support industry, is technical, the fund, the resources, the energy intensity industry, the steel and iron industry development needs overall balance each kind of external condition. Our country is a developing nation, the steel and iron demand is big in the economical development suitable length time, output many years have occupied the world first, but the steel and iron industry technical level and the material and energy consumption and the international advanced level compare also have the disparity, the next development priorities will be the technical promotion and the structure adjustment. In order to raise the iron and steel industry overall technical level, the advancement structure adjustment, the improvement industry layout, the development circulation economy, reduces the material and energy consumption energy consumption, takes the environmental protection, enhances the enterprise to synthesize the competitive power, realizes the industry to promote, develops the steel and iron industry in quantity, the quality, the variety satisfies basically the national economy and the social development demand, has the international competitive power industry, the domestic and foreign situations which the basis relevant law laws and regulations and the steel and iron profession face, formulates the steel and iron industry development policy, instructs the steel and iron industry the healthy development.
回答者：lijishuang - 大魔法师 八级 6-7 09:56

the steel and iron industry is the national economy important foundation industrym realize the industralization support industr, is technical the fund the resourcem overall balance each kind of external development suitable is a development naton the stell anf the necxxt developmentr tcpciocolkitr nkfdskjlkjfdskljdsfkjlkjslajkldsfkj laws and ere reh te regulation has thhe klaw laaw and regulation whicgh whicg nbasis basis has the inre in ternayionla; and do,mestic fave face the stall ana and iron oi indse rihdslhfnhofhnhjlkskjnfds instructs the steel and iron xz= -dfsa economy and the social development demand, has the international competitive power industry, the domestic and foreign situations wchich the basis relevant law laws and regulations and the steel and iron profession face, formulates the steel and iron industry development policy, instructs the steel and iron industry the healthy deveolpment.