高考问答用纸折帽子的步骤图片:帮忙改错
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就是改一篇英语作文，对笔友谈自己的生活和学习的那种，请帮我把改好的完整写一遍，我可以追加积分
谢谢
Dear Dick,
I am glad to hear from you.
I will tell you something about my study and daily life.Because we have many knowledge to study.So we lessons are very hard. I want to do well done by myself.We have lessons from Monday to Friday.We study many different things.I'm very interested in English and foreign curture.
Of course,I will play the basketball and football after study.Sometime I like listening music. I likepopular music.I like reading ,too.It is a good way for relax.That's all. I alawys waiting for your letter next time.
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
最好可以解释一下你改的地方是为什么，要记得把整篇文章都改了重新写下来，拜托了
谢谢
Dear Dick,
I am glad to hear from you.
I will tell you something about my study and daily life.Because we have many knowledge to study.So we lessons are very hard. I want to do well done by myself.We have lessons from Monday to Friday.We study many different things.I'm very interested in English and foreign curture.
Of course,I will play the basketball and football after study.Sometime I like listening music. I likepopular music.I like reading ,too.It is a good way for relax.That's all. I alawys waiting for your letter next time.
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
最好可以解释一下你改的地方是为什么，要记得把整篇文章都改了重新写下来，拜托了
Dear Dick,
I am glad to hear from you.
I will tell you something about my study and daily life.Because we have many things to study, our lessons are very hard. I want to do well by myself.We have lessons from Monday to Friday,and study many different things.I'm very interested in English and foreign culture.
Of course,I play basketball and football after class.Sometimes I listen to music. I like popular music.I like reading ,too.It is a good way to relax.That's all. I will alawys wait for your letter .
Best wishes!
Yours
Li Hua
1.Because和So不能在一起使用
2.knowledge是知识的意思, 不能用来形容去学习
学习的只是书本上的东西
3.done多余
4.play the basketball and football是一种习惯,不能用将来时,还有此处的the 多余,
5.有时听音乐,前面不用将来时,此处保持一致
6.It is a good way to relax介词要用 to
7.等待对方的来信是将来时,不能用现在进行时