高考问答透析高压气囊:我的英语考试作文,希望有初二老师为我评分(要求:80词左右,满分20分)
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I am middle school student.I often listen to your program.I like it very much. And I like the English songs best.I work hard in the daytime.So when I get home,I usually feel tired.Then I turn on the radio and listen to the program.I often lost myself in the beautiful music.And the music usually makes me happy.I learnd some Englisn songs from the program.And the English songs delevop my English.Now my English become better than two years ago.
I hope the program can get better and better.
I hope the program can get better and better.
I am a middle school student.I often listen to your program and I like it very much. English songs is my fovourite.I work very hard in daytime, so when I get home,feeling tired, I will turn on the radio and listen to your program.Sometimes I lose myself in the beautiful music which makes me happy.And from the program I also learn some English songs which delevop my interest for English.Now my English is better than two years ago.
I hope your program can get better and better.
给你改动了一下，看一看吧
不错不错
我们出三练过这个
15分满分的话给13分
13
有少量的语法错误
结构似乎比较含糊
我不是出二的老师
我是高中的老师，我感觉内容还不错，但是有语法错误，而且整个过程设计得不是很好。给12分。