高考问答hot men sex tumblr:请帮忙改篇英语作文
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My Family
I have a big family. They are my father, mother, grandfather, grandmother and I.
My father and my mother work in a same hospital, but my father is a doctor, my mother is a nurse. They work very hard. My father likes to play on the computer, my mother likes to watch TV.
I’m a student, I’m nine years old, I work in my school. I have many friends. I’m very happy, I like play the computer too.
This is my happy family.
这是一位小学四年级学生的作文
I have a big family. They are my father, mother, grandfather, grandmother and I.
My father and my mother work in a same hospital, but my father is a doctor, my mother is a nurse. They work very hard. My father likes to play on the computer, my mother likes to watch TV.
I’m a student, I’m nine years old, I work in my school. I have many friends. I’m very happy, I like play the computer too.
This is my happy family.
这是一位小学四年级学生的作文
I have a big family. There are my father, mother, grandfather, grandmother and I. My father and my mother work in a same hospital. my father is a doctor, and my mother is a nurse. They all work very hard. My father likes playing on the computer, my mother likes watching TV. I’m still a student, I’m nine years old now, I like makeing friends very much.and I like playing computer too. We’re all very happy everyday. This is my happy family.
要注意:like doing 强调爱好, 而like to do 则强调一次性的动作.
还有,写这种作文时可适当用象and这样的连词以流畅.
也不能改你的原意,加工了一下.
第一行~There are my father....
第二行~in the same hospital,and my....
第三行~and my mother likes to watch TV
第四行~I study in my school.
第四行~play computer,too
楼主是初中生吧~
最多初二
正确 I work in my school这句不要 多余