王广成广场舞爱疯了:请帮我修改两段歌词翻译

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我把自己写的拿出来供大家参考,主要是请朋友们改的压韵点:


Little child you must show the way 小孩 你必须展示一条道路
To a better day for all the young 通向为所有年青人准备的美好明天
Cause you were born for all the world to see 因为你的出世是为了让全世界看见
That we all can live with love and peace 我们可以生活在爱与和平中
No more presidents and all the wars will end 不再有总统 战争会终止
One united world under God 在天空下世界团结成一体


When the children cry let them know we tried 当孩子们哭泣时 让他们知道我们的努力
When the children fight let them know it ain't right 当孩子打斗时 让他们知道那是错误的
When the children pray let them know the way 当孩子祈祷事 教会他们途径
Cause when the children sing then the new world begins因为儿童的歌声代表世界的新生


You have to display a road kids
To prepare a better future for all young people
Cause your birth is to let the world see
We can live in love and peace
President of the war will no longer be terminated
In the skies of the world unite into one

When children cry, let them know that our efforts
When children fight, let them know it was wrong
When the children pray that the church they way
Cause children singing on the new world .
重新帮你翻了下 看得出来 你是和平主意者喔~:)

是歌曲<when the children cry>.充满朋克味道的吉他和嘶哑的声音告诉我们这个世界的不幸还有,别把我们的罪带给孩子们:)~~
这是歌词的中英,有的歌词句子是连在一起的,翻译时要连贯些,可以和你自己翻译的对照下:)~~

little child you must show the way 孩子,你要走出一条路
to a better day for all the young 为了所有的孩子
cause you were born for all the world to see 找到一条通往美好明日的路
that we all can live with love and peace 因为你来到这世上就是要让全世界见证我们都可以生活在爱与和平中

no more presidents and all the wars will end one united world under god 更少的政客,更少的战争 同一片天空下,同一个和睦世界

when the children cry let them know we tried 当孩子们哭泣时,告诉他们我们并未无动于衷

when the children fight let them know it ain't right 当孩子们争斗时,告诉他们这样不对

when the children pray let them know the way 当孩子们祈祷时,告诉他们路在何方

cause when the children sing then the new world begins……
因为当孩子们歌唱之时,一个崭新世界就此开始……