不朽的名曲百度网盘:请问下面的英语句子有没有语法错误

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just one last dance before we say goodbye when we sway and turn round and round and round
just one more chance hold me tight and keep me warm cause the night is getting cold and I don't know where I belong

when we sway "and" turn round and round 中and用的不恰当,因为and连接的两个部分主语是不同的,前者是we,后者是dancer,用and连接会引起歧异
belong--belong to
just one more chance hold me tight 这句中间缺乏主语,显得语义不清

warm---warmly
belong----belong to

one last dance《——???