中秋送礼佳品:请大家来修改一篇英语日记

1、开头爱好都用一般现在时，因为你是在今天写的这篇日记。
2、because引导的原因状语从句应和主句一块放在一句话里。
3、His name is Su Jixuan应改为He is Su Jixuan，否则就成了他的名字是一个十三岁的孩子了。
4、game show和cartoon不止一个事物了，所以不能用it,前面的show也不能用单数。
5、like doing sth.或like to do sth.，而不是like do sth.
6、最后一句话中的tell改成say就更符合语言习惯了。

给你一篇范例：
Today is sunny. And I think this is a pretty good day because today is my brother's birthday.
Let me tell you about him. He is Su Jixuan, a 13-year-old boy. His favorite sport is soccer. His favorite music is pop music. What? His favorite TV shows? Oh! They are game shows and cartoons! And he likes telling jokes.
I think he is a funny boy. Let's say happy birthday to him!

Today was sunny.And I think this is a pretty good day.Because today is my brother's birthday.
Let me tell you about him:
His name is Su Jixuan,a 13-year-old boy.His favorite sport is soccer.His favorite music is pop music.
What?His favorite TV show? Oh!It's game show and cartoon!And he likes telling jokes.
I think he is a funny boy.Let's say"Happy birthday!"to him!

Today was sunny.And I think this is a good day.Because it's my brother's birthday.
Let me tell you something about him:
His name is Su Jixuan,he is a 13-year-old boy.His favorite sport is soccer.His favorite music is pop music.
Which are his favorite TV show? Oh!They're game show and cartoon!And he likes telling jokes.
I think he is a funny boy.Let me say "Happy birthday!”to him!

It's sunny today,and i think it is a pretty good day.Because it's my brother's bithday.
Let me tell you something about him:
His name is Su Jixuan,a 13-year-old boy, whose favorite sport is soccer. He also like the pop music very much. what? You wanna know what's his favorite TV shows? Oh, that would be game shows and cartoons.Besides, he likes telling jokes anytime.I think he is a funny boy.Let's say "Happy Birthday" to him.