高考问答吴亦凡鹿晗打架:请英语高手帮忙看看这篇英语短文如何？有没有语法错误。。
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I went to AnHui for hiking with my friends last Sunday. Because of HuangShan is one of the most beautiful mountains in China, even in the world. The weather there was quite good. It was neither too cold nor too hot. I liked it very much .
At the top of the mountain ,I could see a lot of beautiful and great scenery. So I took some photos.HuangShan is the place to be ,whether it’s summer or winter!
It took us five days to trip, and we enjoyed ourselves very much. Our trip very short,but our memory of the pleasant trip will last long!
I went to AnHui for hiking with my friends last Sunday. Because of HuangShan is one of the most beautiful mountains in China, even in the world. The weather there was quite good. It was neither too cold nor too hot. I liked it very much .
At the top of the mountain ,I could see a lot of beautiful and great scenery. So I took some photos.HuangShan is the place to be ,whether it’s summer or winter!
It took us five days to trip, and we enjoyed ourselves very much. Our trip very short,but our memory of the pleasant trip will last long!
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