商场电气火灾自查报告:这个句子有什么错误吗？

waied用在此没问题，好与不好另当考虑！

some of the detectives waited inside 中不能用waited ，该用 waiting ，是一个进行时，整句应该是some of the detectives (who were )waiting inside ,简明语句，省略who were ，说明的是，who were 要么同时出现，要么同时消失，反之是不行的！

还有就是，简洁语句，也属同一谓语，可以不用再用waiting！

所以，改后就是：

When the plane arrived, some of the detectives waiting inside the main buildingm while others on the airfield

有问题.
1.waited用的不好

2.烦琐.可以把第二个 waited去掉.

所以，这个句子该是:
When the plane arrived, some of the detectives were waiting inside the main building while others on the airfield.

When the plane arrived, some of the detectives ware waiting inside the main building while others ware waiting on the airfield.
或
When the plane arrive, some of the detectives waited inside the main building while others waited on the airfield.

arrived该为arriving，后一个waited改为waiting

改后
When the plane arrived, some of the detectives were waiting inside the main buildingm while others on the airfield.

wait应该加ing