河蚌水族箱里怎么养:我翻译的准确吗？请大家指正

I won't cry.

Because my heart is seeking help to my couragement.
潇洒应该这样比较好：elegant and uncanventional

第一句不太对，
I won‘t cry更准确一点，表达心情更准

你是英译汉还是中译英啊？~
free and easy 有自由自在的意思~
真不错~
不过没关系，因为翻译讲究的是韵味、意境，最好是意译而非直译，不是一字不漏的全文翻译~不然那是外语课上的事情~
加油哦~

I don't cry,
it's because I mourn and am asking the courage for help I'm clear, and it's deep It's refined, it's you aren't supposed to cry even all and to remove the way.
There is a way I should pursue with you who don't have to help so that I may lose you who don't permit making such error it isn't possible to express my pain to which and lose the world.

I don't wanna cry
'cause my heart is asking for help to my courage
I want to be free
'cause there's no choice except free

How can I express my pain
I don't want to make any mistake
'cause lose you just like lose the world
what I want to do is be with you forever

I'm free and easy..........
这算什么？