魔戒食人妖模型:[汉译英]翻译简单短文,请英语人士入~

I have received your photos and store them into my computer. The landscape of your hometown is very beautiful as your smile. In my mind, it looks that you are much younger in the photo. I am going to Xi'an this weekend and stay there untill the course starts in September. I don't know when we can meet again. I will do my best to study English and hope my English will get better when we meet again in the future, so do you. Here are some photoes of mine, wish you like it. looking forward your reply.

best regards

your sincely

xxxxxx

信比较中文化，逐字翻译而且不要中式英语，呵呵，要求不低，将就着吧。

我收到你的照片了,并把它们收进了我的电脑里.
I've got your photos and saved them in my computer.
你的家乡很美,你笑起来的样子很可爱,我一直认为你看起来比你的实际年龄年轻许多.
Your hometown's really beautiful and your smile is so adorable. What's more, I always think you look much younger than your actual age.
这个周末我要去西安,等9月份回来我的大学就开学了,不知道什么时候能再见面了~
I've to head for Xi'an this weekend and will return when the new term begins in September. I don't know when we may meet again.
这段时间我会尽我最大的努力学习英语的,希望再见面时我能有进步,也希望到时候你的中文会有进步~
Before our reencounter, I'll strain to study English in the expectation that I can make much progress when I see you, and wish that you could talk to me in fluent Chinese by then.
给你几张我的照片,希望你喜欢.非常期待能收到你的邮件,祝好运!
Attached please find some of my photos, and I hope you'll like them. I'm looking forward to you email desirously and bid you good luck!

I've recieved your pictures and saved it in my computer.The view of your hometowm is good.In fact,I always think you look younger because of your lovely smile.This weekend I'll go to Xi'an,and when I'm back on September it's time to go to school.It will be difficult for us to meet.
I'll try my best to improve my English.It's expected that my English will be improved and so is your Chinese.Here are my several pictures,and hope that you will like them.
Look forward your early reply.

我收到你的照片了,并把它们收进了我的电脑里.
I've received your photos, and kept them in my computer.
你的家乡很美,你笑起来的样子很可爱,
your hometown is really beautiful, as well as your smiles.
我一直认为你看起来比你的实际年龄年轻许多.
I've always been thinking that you looks much younger than you really are.
这个周末我要去西安,等9月份回来我的大学就开学了,不知道什么时候能再见面了~
I'll go to Xi'an this weekend and when i come back in sept., the new semester begins. I don't know when i can see you again.
这段时间我会尽我最大的努力学习英语的,希望再见面时我能有进步,也希望到时候你的中文会有进步~
During this period, I'll try my best to learn english. Hope I can make great progress when we meet again. And I'm sure that your chinese is becoming better and better, isn't it?
给你几张我的照片,希望你喜欢.非常期待能收到你的邮件,祝好运!
Sending you some of my photos, i hope you will like them.~
Expecting your mails. good luck~

我收到你的照片了,并把它们收进了我的电脑里.
I received your photograph, and accept them into my computer.
你的家乡很美,你笑起来的样子很可爱,我一直认为你看起来比你的实际年龄年轻许多.
Your home town is very beautiful, the appearance that you smile is lovely, I have been thinking that you look the more actual than your age young and many.
这个周末我要去西安,等9月份回来我的大学就开学了,不知道什么时候能再见面了~
This weekend I will go to Xian, waiting to come back my university and then schooled begins September, doing not know that can meet again when~
这段时间我会尽我最大的努力学习英语的,希望再见面时我能有进步,也希望到时候你的中文会有进步~
This time I will do me the biggest and diligent study English, the hope meets again I can have the advance, also hoping your Chinese to there will be the advance when the time comes~
给你几张我的照片,希望你喜欢.
Give you a my photograph, hope you like.
E非常期待能收到你的邮件,祝好运!
xpects very much can receive your mail, wishing the good luck!

i've received your photos,and i kept them in the pc.your hometown is quite beautiful,and you smiles very lovely.i find that you look much younger than your age.
this weekend i will stay in xi'an until until the new term starts in september,i don't know when for us to meet~in this period,i will try my best to learn english well,hope i can make more progress the time we meet again, i also wish your chinese can be better than before.well~~here are some photos of mine,wish you like them.expecting your e-mail,good luck to you!