高考问答callmebaby模仿:请各位帮我看看我写的这篇英文日记有没有语法错误?如果有请帮忙指出，谢谢!
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我是六年级的学生,英文成绩一向挺好,这次放假老师让我写篇英文日记,记录一些日常的事情,练习英文作文.我就写了一篇,但这是我第一次英文日记,不知道有没有语法错误,所以请大家帮忙检查一下,如果有,请指出.另外,请大家打打分，以六年级的水平，这篇日记能打几分?谢谢.
September 1st
This morning, I got up early. I went to the Guangzhou Hotel with my parents. We waited for the bus there. At about eight, we travelled to Macau by bus. We got to Macau at twelve. Then we had lunch. We bought a map of Macau. First, we went to the Lotus Flower in Full Bloom. That's one of the famous place in Macau. Then we went to the famous A-Ma Temple. It is a very good place, we took photos there. We also went to the Macau Tower. It is very tall. It's about 338 meters tall. It's the tallest tower in Macau. After that, we went back to the hotel. All of us had fun in Macau today.
September 1st
This morning, I got up early. I went to the Guangzhou Hotel with my parents. We waited for the bus there. At about eight, we travelled to Macau by bus. We got to Macau at twelve. Then we had lunch. We bought a map of Macau. First, we went to the Lotus Flower in Full Bloom. That's one of the famous place in Macau. Then we went to the famous A-Ma Temple. It is a very good place, we took photos there. We also went to the Macau Tower. It is very tall. It's about 338 meters tall. It's the tallest tower in Macau. After that, we went back to the hotel. All of us had fun in Macau today.
写得很好啊,加油哦,没什么错误拉.
要是你是六年级的话，这篇作文就很不错
waited for 1 后面是什么？