位面破坏神起点:请帮忙修改英语短文,谢谢

原文如下:
The person whom I most like is Uchiha Itachi, he’s from the comic NARUTO.
Itachi has beautiful black eyes, but Itachi’s eyes will become red when Itachi is angry or needful circs. Those eyes are called Syaringan, it’s a special ability for Uchiha’s person. Itachi’s eyelashes are long, so many people thing that Itachi is a girl when they see Itachi. Itachi has long straight black hair, 绑着一个辫子. Itachi has a trait-there are two golgo lines(the lines that go from right under the eye to the upper part of the cheek) on his face. Many people say that Itachi is an old man because of the two lines. But I don’t think Itachi is old, contrarily, this trait is different from others.
Itachi always wears dark-color clothes, especially black clothes. Itachi usually wears Uchiha’s black uniform and pants when he was young. Now, Itachi wears his organization’s uniform-a dust coat with red clouds on it. Itachi also wears a headband.
I love Itachi. Itachi is the smartest boy in the world!

请把那里的中文也翻译一下
另外请告诉我英文里有没有"头帘"这个词
请把文章修改一下啊~~~谢谢啊