好听的男生歌曲:请大家修改一篇英语短文

My mother
My mother isn't very beautiful,I think.She has a medium build but a little fat,has long straight black hair,and wears glasses.And she's a little strict.Sometimes,she criticizes on me.However,if I study hard,she will be very happy.But it simplely happens.The more is crimination.
My mother is a doctor.She works hard,so most people said to her:"You are good!"

My Mother
I think my Mother isn't very beautiful.She is medium build and she is a little fat ,she has long straight black hair,and she wears glasses. She's a little strict with me .Sometimes,she criticizes on me.If I study hard,she will be very happy .
My mother is a doctor and She works hard,Many people said to her:"You are good!"
妈妈特指是"我的妈妈"时,M要大写,不过这是小问题,其他的都帮你改了.希望你学习进步哦!@-@

My mother
My mother isn't very beautiful,I think.She is medium builder and a little fat ,she has long straight black hair,and she wears glasses. She's a little strict with me .Sometimes,she criticizes on me.If i study hard,she will be very happy .
My mother is a doctorand She works hard,Many people said to her:"You are good!"

My mother
My mother isn't very beautiful,I think.She is medium build and a little heavy,she has long straight black hair,she wears glasses.And she's a little bit strict.Sometimes,she's criticize of me.But,if me study hard,she's very happy.But this time is very few.The more is criticize.
My mother is a doctor,She is work hard,More people said her:"You are good!"

My mother
My mother isn't very beautiful,I think.She has a medium build but a little fat,with long straight black hair,and wears glasses.And she's a little strict.Sometimes,she criticizes on me.However,if I study hard,she will be very happy.But it hardly happens.The more is crimination.
My mother is a doctor.She works hard,so most people said to her:"You are good!"