郓城县建设局官网:大家看看这样翻译有没有错句

1.means后要用名词,6 means favorable,8means fatten,9means forever 都有误.改为:6 means favor,8 means wealth,9 means eternity.
2.they spend a lot of money on the lucky numbers(number用复数好)
3.they can [(success):用动词succeed] (that):改用if they (have):改为do nothing (to do with):改为about it.
4.The poor man not because of a lucky number will became a rich man改一下:A lucky number cannot make you become a rich man
5.If you want to be a rich man 改为If you want to be rich
6.You must effort改为You must work hard.

太多中国式英语了

替你粗粗改了下下，大写地方是我改的。

Some people think it IS important for them to get a lucky number,for example,6 means favorable,8 means fatten,9 means forever and so on. Sometimes,they spend a lot of money on lucky numberS.I don't believe THAT they can ACHIEVE that. GETTING RICHER have nothing to do with LUCKY NUMBER.The poor WILL NOT GET RICHER JUST because of a lucky number.If you want to be a rich man .You must WORK HARD.