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What we play is an ash miss.After reorganize of~( the language orders as far as possible and in brief, we are just the grade 6)
Long time ago, there is a little girl, call the ash miss( cinderella), her parents died, she only have an after mother and an elder sister, they are all is very not good to her.One day, her want to attend a dancing party after the mother and her elder sister, let the ash miss make dress.The ash miss did the clothes all through the night, but she be like to attend this dancing party how!She is cry, a sorceress appeared, saying to her:" I can attend the dancing party for you, but you must come back by 12:00, and, during the period of dancing party, you can't talk, otherwise, you can not get the happiness forever!"The ash miss orders to nod.
The dancing party all walks after the mother and elder sisterses that day hereafter, the sorceress gives the ash miss a set of clothes, and send her to go to the dancing party.
On the dancing party, a graceful bearing prince walks to the ash miss in front, say:" young lady, would you like to jump a dance with me?"The ash miss orders to nod, but did not talk always.After dancing party end, the prince found out the ash miss finally, saying to her:" in fact, I am the son of the Azrael the 洛 gram, you would like to get married to me?"The ash miss promised.
Hold the wedding at them that day, the Azrael knew, taking the gram of 洛 , the ash miss got sick.After gram of 洛 know, pull to say to the attendant 维 that she trust most:" please give the ash miss my miracle drug.Combine to like to look after her for me'' the attendant have no way, doing like this.
This affair drive after Azrael know, say to the gram of 洛 :" you only have 2 ways,1 is to take back the miracle drug, kill her,2 is an oneself to die!!''
The gram of 洛 would not like to ascend to hurt the ash miss, he knows the attendant that the 维 pull and the ash miss the day was long to living the feeling, hence pull to say to the 维 :" please give the ash miss happy!''
The 维 pull to get married that day with the ash miss, the gram of 洛 is saying to the ash miss heaven;" I love you, you want the happiness..''

Long long ago, there was a girl called Cinderella. Her parents had died and she lived with her step mother and step-sister. They were cruel to her. One day, her step mother and sister were going to a ball, and they asked Cinderella to sew dressed for them. Cinderella sewed day and night for several days, and how she wished to attend this ball! As she cried, a witch appeared and told her:"I can help you to the ball, but you must return before 12 o'clock. What's more, you shall not speak during the whole time, or you will never find happiness!" Cinderella nodded.

On that day of the ball, after her step mother and sister had left, the witch came and gave Cinderella a dress and sent her to the ball.

On the ball, a handsome prince came to Cinderella and asked;"Would you like to dance with me, Young Lady?" she nodded but didn't speak. After the ball, the prince found Cinderella and told her:"In fact, I am the son of the Death, Loch. Would you marry me?" Cinderella accepted it.

Right on the day of their wedding, Death came to knew the whole thing. He took Loch away and Cinderella got sick. After Loch got that information, he told his most trusted attendant, Villa:"please bring my magic pill to her and take good care of her." Villa had no choice but to follow the order.

Again, Death knew about it, he told Loch:"You have only two choices:to take back the magic pill and kill her, or to die." Loch didn't want to hurt Cinderella and he knew that Villa and Cinderella had fallen in love with each other, so he told Villa:"Please make Cinderella happy." The day when Villa and Cinderella got married, Loch spoke to Cinderella from heaven:" I love you and I want you to be happy."

我们演的是灰姑娘。||What we play is an ash miss.经过改编后的~(语言尽量简单点,我们才6年级)
很久以前，有一个小女孩，叫灰姑娘（cinderella）,她的父母死了,她只有一个继母和一个姐姐,她们都对她很不好.有一天,她的继母和她姐姐要参加一个舞会,让灰姑娘做衣服.灰姑娘连夜做了衣服,但她多么像参加这个舞会啊||What we play is an ash miss.After reorganize of~
(the language orders as far as possible and in brief, we are just grade 6)There is a little girl long time ago, call the ash miss(cinderella), her parents die, she only have an after the mother and an elder sister, they all are very not good to her.One day, her want to attend a dancing party after the mother and her elder sister, let the ash miss make dress.The ash miss did clothes all through the night, but she is like to attend this dancing party how!她正哭着,一个巫婆出现了,对她说:"我可以帮你参加舞会,但是在12点以前你必须回来,而且,在舞会期间,你不可以说话,不然,你永远得不到幸福||She is cry, a sorceress appear, saying to her:"I can attend dancing party for you, but you have to come back by 12:00, and, during the period of dancing party, you can't talk, otherwise, you can not get a happiness forever!"灰姑娘点了点头||The ash miss ordered to nod.
舞会那天,继母和姐姐都走了以后,巫婆给灰姑娘一套衣服,并送她去舞会||Dancing party that day, after the mother and the elder sisterses all walk hereafter, the sorceress gives the ash miss a set of clothes, and send her to go to dancing party.
舞会上,一位风度翩翩的王子走到灰姑娘面前,说:"小姐,你愿意和我跳个舞吗||On the dancing party, a graceful bearing prince walks to the ash miss in front, say:"young lady, would you like to jump a dance with me?"灰姑娘点了点头,但始终没有说话.舞会结束后,王子终于找到了灰姑娘了,对她说:"其实,我是死神的儿子洛克,你愿意嫁给我吗||The ash miss ordered to nod, but talked always.After dancing party end, the prince found out the ash miss finally, saying to her:"in fact, I am the son of the Azrael the 洛 gram, would you like to marry to me?"灰姑娘答应了||The ash miss promise.
就在他们举行婚礼的那天,死神知道了,把洛克带走了,灰姑娘病了.洛克知道后,对她最信任的随从维拉说:"请把我的灵丹给灰姑娘.并替我好好照顾她''随从没有办法,这样做了||At them hold a wedding that day, the Azrael know, taking the 洛 gram, the ash miss get sick.The 洛 gram trusts most to her after know of the attendant 维 pull to say:"please give the ash miss my miracle drug.Combine to like to look after her for me''the attendant have no way, do like this.
这件事情被死神知道后,对洛克说:"你只有2个办法,1就是取回灵丹,杀了她,2就是自己死||This affair says to the 洛 gram after ising know by the Azrael:"you only have 2 ways, 1 be take back miracle drug, kill her, 2 be an oneself to die!!''
洛克不愿意上伤害灰姑娘,他知道随从维拉和灰姑娘日久生情了,于是对维拉说:"请给灰姑娘幸福||The 洛 gram would not like to ascend the injury ash miss, he knows the attendant 维 pulls a day to be long to living feeling with the ash miss, hence pull to say to the 维 :"please give the ash miss happy!''
维拉和灰姑娘结婚的那天,洛克在天堂对灰姑娘说;"我爱你,你要幸福||The 维 pulls to get married with the ash miss of that day, the 洛 gram is saying to the ash miss heaven;"I love you, you want a happiness..''

本人很认真的答案
Long ago,there is a little girl named Cinderella.her parents died,and she lived with her stepmother and a sister, they are unfriendly to her. One day, her stepmother and her sister were to attend a ball, so they let Cinderella make clothes.But she, wanted to attend too!When she was crying, a witch appeared, she said : "I can help you to attend the ball, but you have to come back before 12:00 , and at the ball , you must not speak, otherwise you will not be happy! "Cinderella headed.
At the Dance day,after her stepmother and sister were away,the witch gave Cinderella clothes, and sent her to the ball.
At the Ball, a handsome prince said to Cinderella : "Miss, May I? "Cinderella headed first, but never spoke. Dance after the Prince found Cinderella, said : "Actually, I was the son of Death Locke,are you willing to marry me? "Cinderella promised.
On the day of their wedding ,The Death knew that and took Locke away, Cinderella was ill.When Locke knew,he said to his most trusted attendant Ila : "Please take my wonder drug to Cinderella.Take good care of her instead of me.The attendant did so. This matter was known by the Death said : "You only have two options, one is bring the wonder drug and killed her the other way is kill yourself!! '' Locke didn't want to hurt Cinderella, and he came to have a tender feeling for each other ,so he said: "Please give Cinderella happiness! ''
On the day Ila and Cinderella married , Locke said to Cinderella on the heaven; "I love you, you must be happy. . ''

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