济南艺术学校杂技班:帮忙看看有没有翻译错的地方?

我觉得楼主翻译的不错，前面个人觉得有几处可以修改。而最后一句相对来说需要大的改动。

First of all 常用于多方面的，而你是两方面。
it has a twofold meaning. First of all,
it has a twofold meaning. Firstly,

Following the development of the society
With the development of the society

生活标准有些繁琐了
the standard of living of our fellow countrymen is getting higher
our living standard is getting higher

towards individualization, delicacy
towards individualization and delicacy

the need of the consumers
the requirement of the consumers

最后一句。
In this article, the packing decorates of the dry flower is summarized. Moreover, to tackle the special characteristic of the dry flower packing, the design method, the factor and the process of the dry flower are analyzed. The crafty and beautiful packaging design can make the merchandise more attractive and valuable.

全文如下
Abstract: Packaging design is indeed a kind of crafty art. By “crafty”, it has a twofold meaning. Firstly, any material on hand may be used for creation. Secondly, inspiration of creation comes from daily life-any life routine may induce creativity. Good as well as beautiful packaging design should be regarded as a creation of multiple art, and also a concrete expression of beauty. With the development of the society, the living standard is getting higher, and the trend of consumption is towards individualization and delicacy. The quality itself of the merchandise can no longer satisfy the requirement of the consumers. The preference of the consumers has become the decisive factor affecting the sales of the merchandise. In this article, the packing decorates of the dry flower is summarized. Moreover, to tackle the special characteristic of the dry flower packing, the design method, the factor and the process of the dry flower are analyzed. The crafty and beautiful packaging design can make the merchandise more attractive and valuable.

concrete expression of beauty
maybe u should change it to detailed expression of beauty
coz i dun think ppl use concrete
also need of the consumers
u can change it to demands of the consumers
maybe its not right just about to give u a guide
well done anywayz^^

packaging design is considered as an exquisite craft/ art.

wo kao ni men diao w ye yong ying wen gei ni men shuo OK