厉娜许飞是哪一届:请帮助检查以下英语文章的语法错误

第一篇似乎存在不少非语法错误～读不通了～
第二篇：“one kind of the cake”中的the多余；
“difference of it and ”改为“differences between Brownie and ”更好； “lies in”改为“are that”； “and must be”改为“and it must be of"； “will also”前缺主语； “the almond or peanut”改为“almonds or peanuts”； “flavouringly”这个单词似乎不存在～～汗～后面的那个above用得也让人不明所以～～； “Bring”改为“Take”； “eaten”去掉。
累死了～追加点分吧～

1、Brownie is a cake, but it generally cake（单数加s）(改 but it is a general cake)
and the difference is that normally run Brownie (is more) robust, unlike cake ever, and certainly chocolate taste, or almond or above will be decorated and peanut oil. Usually sweet. When used(一篇文章不要出现两种时态) to eat breakfast is quite good.
或
2、Brownie can be regarded as a cake, but the differences art that the Brownie is usually thinner and stronger, not so loose as the cake, and must be the chocolate taste, will (不要有两种时态)
also put the almond or peanut to make ornamental and flavouringly above. Usually very sweet. Bring it as breakfast is eaten pretty well. （最后一具有一些怪怪的） bring is as breakfast is pretty well.

.........同上，太多了